I’m totally confused…
When I look through the window of mind..
I could see fading days…
Darkness will come within no time..
Its too late to decide…
But still sparks of hope shining inside..
Could he come before dusk …
Could I see him before the darkness hiding my eyes???
I feel like screaming to world
I’m here…awaiting ….only for him
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But still sparks of hope shining inside..
Never let this spark fade away..
Keep writing... with the spark inside
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Thanks for the encouragement vivek….
Trying to write …but couldn’t be in full swing in English
Thanks again….!
Thank you Bineesh…
I've gone through your malayalam blog. Its awesome !! An observation is, apart from the first one (Ormayude vasanthakalangal) all others have a similar pattern. Viraham, pranayam, etc. Poems can also sow the seeds of happiness and hope in reader's mind, right?
Do you still remember the story of tottochan and the importance of hope in life(by the way, its tottochan, not
totochan. I also used to make that li'l mistake)
Write in English also. The swing will come eventually
Yaa..you are right..
I too felt the same...but sometime we couldn’t break this shell
This is an invisible trap of life..and another face of escapism
Basic reason is my laziness. Based on love, solitude, separation...
writing could be effortless. Actually this is the reason for concentrating in poetry.
Within minutes we could express our self and no need to suffer this pain for a long time.
I really got bore with this sentimental desperate lost feeling. Trying to break the shell..
But still confused..where could be the next step..
Again thanks Vivek…be nice critic...keep encourage.
It’s a nice feeling that you could awake somebody from their deliberate sleep.
You know, there are no invisible traps in life. Everything is the result of how we think.
If you are still confused of what could be the next step, try this.
Think of all the goodness u've got in life. List them on a piece of paper, starting from the best. This itself will
cultivate the habit of positive thinking.
Try to see everything in life with a fresh enthusiastic mind. Write about them.
As times goes by, u will ll notice that life has become more beautiful.
I will suggest a good book to read - The monk who sold his Ferrari. If you truly seek inspiration, u will never
regret reading it.
Scream loudly... more ....!
Good one... Best wishes...!!!
thanx vivek, your comments are really valuable. sure I'll do read this book.
Thanks Suresh....
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